On that first one I'd try to make the lines straighter, it looks like your hand was shaking. In the second the P looks too small and the R is weak. Your throws need work, the P looks good but overall it seems plain and generic. Put in as much time on throws as you seem to on piecing and you'll have a fresh toss real quick. Cross posting this for better advice. Photo on 2011-09-05 at 10.33
lope thanks homie your shit is on point. hyper you in la man if so holla at me I just moved out here.
i think with a bit of definition that bottom sloter piece could be cool as fuck. maybe make the O a bit smaller though or jazz it up a bit
sear-idk man i looked at your flickr and...i dont know it all looks pretty much the same but diffrent colors and jumpin between capital and lowercase letters try doing some other style stuff maybe? you paint alot and it begins to seem repitterive tezer= i liked your stuff a year ago and i like it now great stuff!! hopefully on a wall on friday
Sear by StuckInTha90's, on Flickr shit was done in like 30 somethin minutes had 2 people walk by, and no problems, good day.
@SEAR- shits lookin clean man @MONE- never seem too amaze me bro keep it up. Anyway heres some shit i did 2 days ago on limited paint! View attachment 31635