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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. Stuck

    Stuck Elite Member

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    whoevers sayin my shit isnt clean.... well congrats they are pen/marker freestyles i really dont have the energy to sketch and erase and whatnot much less give a fuck
     
  2. SneeZ

    SneeZ Senior Member

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    Paser, fucking fresh throw.
     
  3. RES4

    RES4 Elite Member

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    paser- decent throw but you should probably google paser mfk, pretty well known writer
    tofe- i dont like it, the letters are all flowing in different directions. try doin a piece with all your letters sitting straight, then do one with a slight lean to one side
    stuck- i agree with phil about the tezer piece
    zookyook- not big on the throw but i like the page with the orange and blue peices
     
  4. Phillip McDougall

    Phillip McDougall Elite Member

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    The P has too much negative space and you're adding too many doo-dads in and around the throw to distract from the letters
     
  5. RES4

    RES4 Elite Member

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  6. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    I like that a lot^ finish that one with a pimpin fill
     
  7. lord_plankton

    lord_plankton Elite Member

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  8. 4menace2society0

    4menace2society0 Banned

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  9. Strange Journeys

    Strange Journeys Senior Member

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    orange on black is fresh, with that purp and grey
     
  10. Stuck

    Stuck Elite Member

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    a little overboard o the 3d but still good
     
  11. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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    Sear that shits fresh...A little more definition in the top of the S though next time. Just my opinion, too black in there haha and maybe a little something different with the E. Experiment more dawg, stay up.
     
  12. Shroomsh

    Shroomsh Senior Member

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    sear is beast. not on paper but on walls his shit is genuine
     
  13. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    ? hes got it on paper too, yall is trippin
     
  14. scissorcrotch2

    scissorcrotch2 Member

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    lord: that either says katze or kotze, and def needs alot of work. those loop arrows are pointless. Your O or A is to blocky in comparison to the other letters and need to be better defind. The K's back bone is wobbly and just plain bad. Maybe straighten it out more. The T's middle bar shinks in a way that throws it off balance, the top of the z is good but the bottom bar needs to be reworked and the E matches the K the best but the middle bar shouldn't be a circle. And every arrow in the whole piece should be deleted. And go slower when you paint. Needs alot of work but keep at it

    Sear, the 3-d is off and looks wonky making the piece look shaky. The s is weak but i understand how you tried to match that with that dope ass R. The middle of the E shouldn't kink like that. and that A would be dope on it's own but in this piece it's too big and wide. Not bad though.


    Something i did this weekend.

    [Broken External Image]:http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/5583/paserhz2.jpg


    lawlz.
     
  15. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    that looks crazy! what does it read?
     
  16. extinct

    extinct Senior Member

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    eyegasmic... absolutely insane
     
  17. thotz.one

    thotz.one Banned

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    hahaha. it definitely says joe. im diggin that fo real.
     
  18. Stuck

    Stuck Elite Member

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  19. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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  20. Stuck

    Stuck Elite Member

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    ****** wheres my xchange?! dont make me come to texas i know *****s who know *****s up there