whoevers sayin my shit isnt clean.... well congrats they are pen/marker freestyles i really dont have the energy to sketch and erase and whatnot much less give a fuck
paser- decent throw but you should probably google paser mfk, pretty well known writer tofe- i dont like it, the letters are all flowing in different directions. try doin a piece with all your letters sitting straight, then do one with a slight lean to one side stuck- i agree with phil about the tezer piece zookyook- not big on the throw but i like the page with the orange and blue peices
The P has too much negative space and you're adding too many doo-dads in and around the throw to distract from the letters
you little man should write a book or teach at college. heres my boy kotze with the scrapcans freshness..i got love for the arrows! [Broken External Image]:http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy329/lord_plankton/DSCF3382.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy329/lord_plankton/DSCF3389.jpg
Sear that shits fresh...A little more definition in the top of the S though next time. Just my opinion, too black in there haha and maybe a little something different with the E. Experiment more dawg, stay up.
lord: that either says katze or kotze, and def needs alot of work. those loop arrows are pointless. Your O or A is to blocky in comparison to the other letters and need to be better defind. The K's back bone is wobbly and just plain bad. Maybe straighten it out more. The T's middle bar shinks in a way that throws it off balance, the top of the z is good but the bottom bar needs to be reworked and the E matches the K the best but the middle bar shouldn't be a circle. And every arrow in the whole piece should be deleted. And go slower when you paint. Needs alot of work but keep at it Sear, the 3-d is off and looks wonky making the piece look shaky. The s is weak but i understand how you tried to match that with that dope ass R. The middle of the E shouldn't kink like that. and that A would be dope on it's own but in this piece it's too big and wide. Not bad though. Something i did this weekend. [Broken External Image]:http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/5583/paserhz2.jpg lawlz.