Sorry to post a piece of shit but I'm new to writing graffiti instead of just looking at it and was wondering if anybody had any advice on how to improve this.



Let the record state that I know this is terrible and I recognize I am about as big of a toy as you can be.

 

so why ask if its good you know its not. try harder.

 

sometimes we do. i like big readable letters mabye i just have no style fuck it its a rush write fuck the police real big on ya fuckin door.

 

Drunk and ran outta paint on the purple one. the sketch is from 11' just found it. And if u didnt notice i have mad beef with this "Sober" kid. ive been capping all his throws like this, i thot it was funny haha

 

@skue: so mean, love it and hate it. nerver thought about using somebody else's letters like that.
@suburban turban: SOOOOO STEEZY! i love that toss. almost a one liner to boot. blew my mind.

 

thanks arose i appreciate it man im working on gettin it into a one liner or a step closer at least. i wana get better at the "piecing" part, the actual artistic part lol. just takes so much time and patience -.- sick of them god damn simples lol

 

My mate came over did some in my book crits?? GOLF STIFLER

 

nonono

 

Does this style work

 

^ I like the second one the most. I love the C on the second one. Cant tell you more since Im more toy on my own.

 

the A kinda looks like an R but idk i guess youre sorta getting there

 

hack, as a general rule, a throw should be bubble letters. you have the basic form down, but those letters are lanky, and need more curves. imo if you just shorten the length of the legs, kind of squash the hole thing down so that the letters are as tall as they are wide, you'd have something that looked decent.

 

Here's one I did recently

Constructive critisism and helpful feedback to help me improve is greatly apreciated

 

Crits please only ones that will acually help me

 

Not feeling the lower case b