Bars? I think you might be thinking pieces homie. Try not curving the lines that go inside of the letter on the R and K. Also, don't go so wild with the fill colors, it normally just distracts from the letters. EDIT- did you mean straighten them? If so, I get what you're saying there.
yea sorry thats what i meant and okay thanks more like this ? [Broken External Image]:http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p331/dark2_photos/Snapshot_20081115.jpg
isi- practice some more on paper before painting satan- dots on the top, I dont like how the bottom of the s goes over the rest of it dark- put the a rightside up and dont fill with dark colors lsd- nice handy. loose the curlyq's and the arrows Two throws with my name backwards (practice for the battle). Top is a one liner. crits?
I reversed it for a battle. the battle is reverse your name so thats what I did. I'd say make it a capital r. the holes are looking nice though!
oh, alright, I didn't notice it was fully reversed because, well, those are the only two letters you really have to change. Just dicking around.
[Broken External Image]:http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/876/img0213fx2.jpg critzzz... bbv: i like it
zane-- new colors... and i second what baron asked. BBV-- that one made me laugh, haha, change the flag to say BANG! haha, it be dope shitz LSd -- those dark fill ins on the letters seems strange to me, fill them with the same color as the fill around it Synps- i liked the second one the most. any more critz for my throw?? not sure where to go with it.. maybe rounding off the edges, but i kinda like it. it says roci, just random letters thrown together. (the r kinda looks like a p)
zane i dont know if that shadow is going towards a center vanishing point, but if so then that z is off. i kinda like painting in the cold better than warm yeah the finger gets numb as fuck, but its more calming... hmm, guess it just depends on the spot sens finger is still numb i was runnin outta white , so came up a wee bit short on the last s.
first throwie, crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/2115/image068yv9.jpg thats sick mtown, would look better if the n & E were thickened up a bit tho i reckon weakfingers the last two letters could be spaced out a tiny bit more... i think im subscribed to you on youtube? milkboxx tone down the spikes a bit or lose emm and focus more on the letters
Arms im trying to get a Super bubble Style down for "ARMS" but i cant seem to figure it out. can anyone PM me some tips or like Flix of some shit(not trying to bite) just need some help getting my hand back.
View attachment 425665 and older throw with the wooorst "U" xD. View attachment 425666 Big hollow on a work trailer. View attachment 425667 My homie Sic33 putting it down. View attachment 425668 Another one of his. View attachment 425669 A burner at the skatepark (Snk is short for Slunk). View attachment 425670 A muck hollow. View attachment 425671 Super old test one with a paint stick.
*blink* ok i know this the toy forum and all but could you guys work on ur shit before you go out and paint? this community is here for a reason. get criticism before u waste your paint.