@nosmoking I did some of it with cans, it's my first anything on a wall so I have a lot to learn. Thanks. I think the letters on the second throw look awesome- especially the R
Ah cool man. It's a sweet looking character you've obviously got some skill. I do have to admit it's leaning less towards the graff side from my perspective though, but if you can incorporate that into your style more power to ya. --- I decided to give painting a throw a go: [Broken External Image]:http://s5.postimg.org/jw6uq6tdj/Can_throw.jpg
@nosmoking I like the U. The E isn't too bad either. But the T and R could use some work. I couldn't tell it was a T if I randomly saw it without knowing what it said. Keep at it.
@nosmoking: I gotta agree with Jak, the T and R need work. Bottom of the T throws it off kinda looks like a J. The looks kinda awkward compared to the other letters. On the U try not to make the middle line so close to the R's bottom, kinda looks like you messed up. The E's pretty obvious, just clean it up a little. Just focus whenever you're doing a throw up and practice, practice, practice.
@True Work on the T and R, also dont cross out your own tags bruh that shit looks toy as hell @Loon get rid of the tumor off the left side of your L, makes it look like an odd W
thanks for the feedback guys, appreciate it heaps. i'll stick my head down in the books and work on what you've pointed out. hah yeah fair enough. at least it's the scribble you said looks toy and not the throw granted i know my throw needs alot of work
P.S. loon i like your throw it looks tight but the L seems off to me like someone else said kinda looks like a weird W or even an arrow pointing down hura that throw looks pretty nice imo
@loon looks clean, but the "l" is ambiguous... @hura the first one is nice. The camo makes the second one not stand out as much.
I think you should look up how other peeps do throwies, and see if you can get some ideas about letter forms man, these looks p plain
@tuke pretty clean dude, nice flow and shit. just make sure you keep your corners the same, either sharp or rounded
Grabs that throw looks dope. I like your second throw tuke the K and E are lookin stylish Beav I think you should tidy that up its too messy to see what's going on Rest good job starting with the simples your R is bigger than the rest. Browse some throws online like other person said maybe add a pattern to your letters but make sure you keep that simple flow