From last few days .. I know the orange throw is fucked up, Im still learning the caps and cans and u can see it... Crits on the blue plz ( mtn hc)
Yea man you gotta make the d look a little different than the o's and add lines in the d... And since you have so many same shape letters add faces on the o's or something to give it some uniqueness and your shadowing needs to go higher up on the last letter
A throwie i put up yesterday! Creative Crits please coz i know i got abit to work on still. im representing Australia here also so AUSSIE AUSSIE AUSSIE OI OI OI
All letters look similar to me! I am pretty new to graffiti scene myself but I can tell that you need to add some flow to your throwie, reshape your letters instead of doing these holes, be more creative and experiment! I love doodling real fast to find some new shapes n shit, none of that sketching shit
Yesterday some told me to try the hole idea so I did it. I find issuing lines instead works out better for me.