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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.
You got it.
Looks fresh @skkkrt
That whole throw is round besides the Z, might think about incorporating a point in the R
Had to knock the dust off, it’s been damn near two years
Lose the negative space in the Cs and between the R and I
Ran out of paint so I know I have issue with width.
Would you continue to work on bends or got straight back to block letters?
Straight letters. Letter form is not clear here, especially with all the connectors.
I hear you. I forgot to put up the sketch too. Seeing the sketch , more specifically, can control issues or style issues?
CHLOE? The sketch makes a bit more sense, but here's a few things that are wrong
Spacing - the H looks like two separate letters, can't tell where one letter starts and the next ends
Bar width - the crossbar on the H is the same width as the connector growth things? also it varies throughout most letters, make it all same width for now
Letter structure - this is THE MOST IMPORTANT thing to work on, everything else is extra, those random bars obliterate the letter structure
Definitely focus on your straight letters and can control for a while, and lose the extras.
It's my kids name , not what I used to write or am considering writing.
It's been along time since I wrote 17- 18 years.
I'm comfortable with my handstyle and basic black and white trow up.
I'm 100% positive I'm trying not to bite anyone's style. That's where the extra comes from . I definitely hear you ,its not working.
I was telling myself it's all can control . I'm adjusting to the cans and tips. Ironlak and Montana gold dont do like krylon and rustoleum.
Thanks though. Back to the books. Not saying I was ever putting up burners . But definatly use it or lose it.
i need criticism
Look at the comments on my shit right above your post.
Then look at my comment Iposted in the toy slaps threat yesterday I ironically covered some of the same advice prior to posting on this thread. But I have an example of the points I hit. From hand style to burner and everthing between, the concepts of the suggested reads apply. Maybe get a color wheel.
Some width fuck ups on the lower letters
BURP eh nice calligraphy style throwie BURRRRP its better than whatever the fuck is above that CRAP
make ur letters the same size for now... then post pic to see how that turns out for more crits..
new to the site. Sharing some drawing I did.
Fuck You..buy some pens or gtfo.
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