[Broken External Image]:http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/1637/dsc06188ow8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/dsc06188ow8.jpg/1/w640.png oene-nice one alien-lmfao nutsack,change your I and N. yosh-what is that little ball at right side of Y?change your S
blink- i like everything but ur t, the first one is alright but the second one, make the middle line wider... shayk- letters all the same size, all on the same page, after that just gets into structure
sure is.. the y reminds me of YNOT the S reminds me of SPIN some quick daytime hollow downtown. kinda wack but w.e same shit as always blox... change ur LI
bink1-- looking good shayk-- it's better but still, make all the letters the exact same size. your A Y and K are all different from the S and H.
Yo, just wanna say thanks for the critz boys. I appreciate it alot. But, yo, If i should write alen, I was just thinking there would be atleast someone else writing that. You know?
add a letter to the end then lol like an e,s change the n to a z i duno... if u dont like it then just change ur name in general... just ideas
new name im thinkin of rockin.what do you guys think?any advice or comments....[Broken External Image]:http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z241/RAEL_ONE/Picture394.jpg
yea blunttokes that is kinda wack...no offence once that looks pretty nice, it's different but nice. View attachment 437713 crits *****s!
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blunt- i duno what to say it looks good but at the same time, i dont get it because it doesnt look like what u usually write once- letters all the same size ur o is so small and ur n is huge scrap- ur R A and P should all have the same middle space... it's hard to explain but ur r has a dot, ur a has a little o and ur p has a d you should make them all the same little- first pic: ur s shouldn't go off.. keep it together like the rest of the letters to make a square second pic: dope, maybe add something in the p but it looks good right now, try colour? Bizar- bottom and top of ur r shouldnt colide, not feeling the twirls/eye (maybe switch to lines?), not feeling the teeth, maybe just go simple =D