i dont realy like giving crits because im not good at all. but i like the n its nice but your s needs some work make it the same size as the rest of the throw i also would leave the o empty keep workin tho and ill do the same

 

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I'm not very experienced with throws but I think I got the flow down. The K didn't come out as I wanted it to.

 

ur style is the illest eskimo. i like ur pieces better than ur throws though. its still hot but it could use some messin around with, im not likin the k or the spike in the i

 

im actually digging that throw a lot man, good job

 

stop making the lines so erratic and calm the fuck down with the lines inside the letters, make it all round, that spike in the i is gay

 

bump this

 

thats hot zase, paint it.

some bullshit with highlighters
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YOUR DAD
dead space.
looks gheyyyyy
wtf is up with the floating bar above the E?

doesn't flow, like a throw should flow, you know?
holy fuck, I'm a god damn emcee.

 

i write sè

 

that looks sick man keep it up!

 

yeah Zase and eskimo both of yours look dope...

 

zase, nice man. i love the a, not too much the s. i cant recommend what to do with it though, sorry.

 

ya i write SIN. this was about 3-4 months ago. i think i have improved a lil since then

 

lmao i do SE throwies aswell.
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Sin- stick to paper man. i don wanna hate, but that throw is garbage. work your stuff out in the books before you hit the streets.

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Ive finally fixed this one!
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Now what do you think of these?

 

sin youre getting way ahead of yourself. check out the "new to graff" thread.

 

sone, you think its an "ok" start for someone whos been writing for about 6 months....

 

probably not. youre about where i was 6 months in. but i was going about it with no guidence. just doin what your doing. on bombing science people help out alot, and 6 months on bs would make you wayyyy better than what you are now. keep at it.