colz- idk if u wanna listen to me caz i suck too, but maybe shade the inside of the o on the right side a bit...and some on the bottom of the letters?...and idk, i guess...keep working on it...mine's not much better than urs so i've been working on new styles and whatever too
ahahaha yea she did i had a shit load of prisms i got from Michael's and now my mom found the stash and took them away threw them away i got crayola now ahaha dont diss crayola
oo...i think i gotta new name: cybe [Broken External Image]:http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image490.jpg it's a shitty throw, but i'm still trying new things EDIT: for now it's just a straight letter like zarb said below...but i'm working on it
[Broken External Image]:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0615091841.jpg Jolz- Looks like you just started, just keep fucking around with the letters and you'll get it CYBE- Thats more of a straight letter, but make your C closer to your Y Geez- I like the 2nd one the best Stussy- Pretty cool, your much better then me so I have nothing to really say Crits? I messed shadow on my E pretty bad.
forget about shading for now and just work on making ur letters as sick as they can be. *EDIT: directed at shurik
Zarb- I think the shadow in the middle of the last letter is messed up Shruk*n- Ditch the 3D for now and work on letter structure and consistant size View attachment 485648
dude.. stash them in a vent or like under your dresser.. get an old computer and take all the guts out if she asks what its for be like its for computer class for extra credits..
Rewz-Wow, If you mom is actully throwing away your markers your gonna have to keep the whole paint obsession way on the DL. Besides you can just say i enjoy drawing with marker, its not like your going out doing drippy prisma tags on mailboxes.... anywayzzzzzzzzzzz, Jol-Wayyyyyyy basic, Id say draw for a couple weeks to progress then post some ish, just look around and see how others do it for now, But starting simple is how i started and youll progress really fast, Cybe- I dont really like it. Id say just look back at this forum and see the general direction of others and work from there. Zarb- Man i like how your trying new ish but The middle line in E's are WAY to overused, well that just my opinion but just yeah the other thing i see way to much is the right leg on the K. Try to think of some fresh shit. Mes-I think if you have a 3 letters name you should atleast put more work into your throw then that. Get some letters that match instyle then youll be on your way. I've been focusing on school for the past little bit but im getting back into drawing and so on. Crit away!
CYBE : round it up, close the gaps JOL : good basic start (better than mine), just make you J as round as the rest of your letters SQWINT: awsome throw, but close the gap between your N and your T Heres mine, crits plz, i've been trying to ''evolve'' from my basic throwup [Broken External Image]:http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/1695/dsc0177v.jpg
feir: i dont like tha F and E extensions that much ... mayb its just me but it was hard for me to get that was an F until i read what u wrote saying it says FEIR lol. i like that R tho. keep workin at it
You guys realize you should bea ble to do a hollow throw in about 30 seconds right? and a fills hould take you about 1:30-2:00 You guys goin crazy That's not what a throw should be Simpler is better.
fein: ur better than me caz i just started and u've prob been doing it for years, but the squigly line for ur f...idk, i'm just not really liking it. But u don't have have to take my advice...just saying
squint-I really like it except the gap in the middle of the N and the T feir-Trying cleaning up the F a little. cybe-If i could choose to do out of the 4, i'd do the 2nd
personally i think you should [Broken External Image]:http://membres.lycos.fr/fredrichung/forum/kill it with fire.jpeg