Don't make the left side so much smaller than the right, make the top right of the M pop up like the top left, and lose the negative space between the dot of the I and the base.

 

true thanks for the tips

 

Hemis throw is mad Really nice style.
But i cant think of a better D letter : ( Maybe this one's better, what do ya think?:
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:S

 

I don't see what people are hating on, I think that's a dope D.
Your Ls, however, need work.
I wouldn't bend them up like you've been doing, it makes them look like backwards Js.

 

But backward J is almost an L. Isn't it?

 

I'm just not digging it, dude.
It's your throw though, do what you want with it.

 

Tried everything with it, probably a bad name. heh...

 

i find L's to be the most difficult letter to do a throwy for. just my opinion. but i like what you're doing with it. the first one you posted almost looks like a U tho. honestly its a pretty nice throwy. keep working with it and see what you can do.

 

I'm liking this one way more than the stuff on the walls (which btw, you should be smashing with a piece ay.) I like that "L" however the "D" is going nuts, too much going on for my liking there.

 

That D is dopee.

Just don't do the swirl in my opinion. And I have no advice for L's.. I fucking suck at L's.

 

Hey guys thanks I really appreciate your comments
And for sofatoner: Im too lame to do a piece, im a bomber haha....:/
Now, im probably gonna go out and try my new throw on the walls. Probably post pics later
Just a one more little question, which D is better, with a straight line, or with a swirl:?
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Straight for sure mate....
Well, at least keep that spot on lockdown to practice doing pieces ay..... I wish there were places like that near where Im at ay....

 

First post- don't be too hard on the smack down
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Sofatoner, thanks man, really helped me And yea, there are a lot spots like that near me cause i live near really old railway so there a lot abandoned buildings ya know
And Shell, you should post a pic of your throw done with marker, cause i cant see anything now

 

Laimonel - no worries mate...Im still jealous of your abandoned spots but. If I had somewhere like that then I'd be painting it all the time ay.... But yeh...the straight "D" with the "L" that you were doing should look good...try and do one with a fill (ie: a silver fill with black outline)...It should look pretty decent ay...

Shell - That is terrible....I'm not sure but it looks like you're trying to write "HWIS"... If so, then you need to work on your "I" to make it look like an "I", your "S" is larger than the rest of your letters so you should probably fix this, your "H" is boring....no style going on there mate...
your "W" is your strongest letter but even that needs tweaking....

Lemme know what you're writing and I will do you a few throwies for you to look at... Im not claiming to be the best but you defo need a bit of help ay.... get back to me and ill get it done mate....

 

Damn, if i only had some paint Got just a bit of black left for some outlines. :/

 

You can always buy paint though...It's a whole lot harder to rack these days than back when Style Wars etc. came out... So don't even trip about that shit ay... But I defo wanna see that throwie with a fill and outline, not just the outline if possible ay mate.

 

Yea, in my town there is like the only place to buy paint and its a small shop so there's no way you can rack cause the cashier can see everything. And i dont have money right now though. But when i get my paint, i promise, ill post the flick here for you

 

sweet.... If ya ever wanna do an exchange mate, im down....but yeh, i look forward to seeing that throwie...