well mess around with it, its all about finding your own style. But i think even just putting a nub on the left part of the H where the middle bar is would improve the way it looks it sorta just spices it up in my opinion
[Broken External Image]:http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa41/steve-o_070/0708000040.jpg Needs work. Gettin there tho, crits welcome.
Thanks for pointing that out, now I cannot un-see it haha. lol you from T-town? I lived there for like 10 or so years. (random)
[Broken External Image]:http://i985.photobucket.com/albums/ae339/PushYourEdge/DSCN2531.jpg Tell me what yal think of this throwy. The dserv and rpsk tags i've done better but this is the new throwy i'm thinking about making official i'm def feelin it. I've only practiced this throwy a few dozen times so once I get more reps in I'm sure it will be lookin proper as fuck. Tips and critiques welcome so please hit me with em. Peace
Haha your gonna get so much hate for doing that! Don't write cap, it is taken, and you will be ridiculed for using it. PS: Yeah stevo im from temecula, this place sucks dick. Did you ever write down here?
...a bad rep? The ***** is a LEGEND. Lrn2graffiti. Nask, your throws are fine. Take a break and work on those hands though, man.
Dserv: I like the style, but i feel like the R could be less bumpy on the right side, and the V doesn't really fit with the other letters my first time using paint lol:
Essen...sketch more. Develop more of a style. Things are looking pretty simple..Yes I know you're new, but plan. Throw a shadow in there, find a practice spot. Cardboard es no bueno. Kid...you have the right idea going. Just work with it. The more you practice, the more you'll develop your letters. I see some potential for sure. Try not to put the slits in your letters...it makes it look too compact...you could easily give your bomb more depth if you fix that a bit. prickster....keep it up. I dig that. The second page is looking more on point! Royal....personally, I don't know how I feel about the arrows in the letters. The S and E are okay, but the D and R, I don't know man..as a whole it works alright, but I just dont know about those arrows. Maybe round off the right side of your V so its in sync with the rest of the throw. Cobra....Cap is too simple and cliche..thats only my opinion...but I think that your stuff doesn't look too bad and you can definitely challenge yourself a bit more. Abeone.....its on its way. Try making the D look a bit more D like, haha. I thought it was an O at first glance. I kind of just get a sloppy vibe, not to be offensive at all...but I think you should round the legs of the K and R off a lot more...bubble that up a bit more because I know exactly what you're going for. Almost there man...The S is looking alright. I like the top. Just try and keep everything flowing. I'm aware that it overlaps...its because paper is just sloppy copy for wall. Just a little somethin' somethin'..
I know its sloppy but I was sketching it just quick to get the idea down... View attachment 574442 crits?