its the logo for cityrail:

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the train service.

 

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just some ideas.

kane- ur k does not flow
sbal- ur middle throw is ur best, make your letters less chunkie and fix up your a,

 

Neither one of these are amazing, the top is to fat in my opinion. and the bottom one i did in about 30 seconds.
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everyone sayin kanes K is bad is WRONG! (in my opinion lol)... that K and A are dope, itd make a good 2 letter throw... but the N and E is what im not feelin...

 

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Hipe- try to keep the letters the same size

 

This is my 2nd name in the streets. Just made it.

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Crits plz... yes.. it is small!

 

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crit

 

Ashis- Make the body and dot of the i a little bigger and you'll be lookin pretty zazzy

 

smokeitup. work on the style a lil bit before you go thrown it up everywhere believe me when your better youll regret ever doing thaT

 

Those hollows are steezy.

 

Smoke, your letters fucking suck. Slow down and pay attention to what letters you're trying to create. Your 'D's still look like clowned up 'M's.

I'd be annoyed to have to look at them letters everyday in that city...


The only thing good about them is the 'E' with the face on the end of that hollow throw you did in black. On the white wall, not the brick. But it doesn't fit the flow. It looks like you just copied it from another throw and pasted it on the end.

 

And the faces have unnecessarily long lashes that don't fit and flip at the end.

 

What do you mean the body? And which name ism or ASHiS?

 

whachu write

 

switch up the u alil bit

 

the k also looks forced to me .