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what exactly is the first letter supposed to be? not even figuring it out in the tag

 

Hahaha, thanks man. I think I agree.

Soze: Really like your S, fix up the inside of your O and that would look fantastic.

NouveauP: Looks really good, maybe ditch the !

 

^try to get a better picture next time, i can barely even see that. looks like siy? tbh i dont like any of the letters from what i can see

 

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Crits?

Straight line or curve on top?

Changed the O - looks better now

peace

 

Ahole.

I'm not feeling the H and the L, but it's fresh. Nice toss.

 

?
U mad?

Worry about your own throws.

 

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Nice face!

 

nah

 

yambo get some style before you get up so much, just makes you look like a toy

 

props to the spot at least

 

lmao yo shut up i like my shit i keep putting the shity ones in the toy threads so why u complaining

 

Yo, you *****s can't hate on this kid, he lives IN hip hop.

 

yo yambo...phat is right...

go to bridges and chill spots...no one wants to see that shit on the street..what you put up and how good it looks does represent you as a writer...so right now, everyone thinks that sie kid is wack..or whatever you write...start doin' straights, then when you go to the streets you won't be seeing any 2 feet tall 3 feet wide throwies..

 

crits appreciated

 

sorry for 2 posts