[Broken External Image]:http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/5269/imag0322d.jpg bump for crits GNAR - whats up with the line through the middle of the G? neg space in the N is too much, and idk about the hard corners on the right side of your R, they dont really go with the rest of it
wussup wit this shit [Broken External Image]:http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/6094/snapshot201102231.jpg
lol sorry to blow the page up jrone - put some structure in there and tweak your letters. you got the right idea your just making the wrong mistakes hab112 - lets see more! gnar & ian - clean styles. now get some flow in there. you already know what your doing. lol now just do it a million times. tweak them a little each time to let the letters develop
some tweaks ..a tilt on the J and made the R less blocky ..i think this is a dope throw up toy or not but all advice u can give ill accept
try making the top of your r smaller and the bottom bigger, looks akward. if you think its dope do it just dont get heated when u get beefed
no to the foot on ur r and remember your a toy drop the ego at the door listen and learn ....hab nice choice of letters s and e are 2 of my personal favs too looks good tho man...youth steezy ass shit like always only thing is the first throw the y looks alot like an s . And gnar faces dont make the throw your style does focuis more on the style aspect.
i just started so i think people might fuck with my stuff but ima just keep bombing n bombing n try to keep getting better ..i think my stuff will look better in spray paint to cuz i writing on some carboard type paper n it peels THANKS