Thanks for the crits and compliments.

wilbur, the bottom left of your w doesnt look right. maybe bring it lower or make it round. i like it other than that

 

Brown

 

quick toss


Snapshot_20110412_3 by grinder13, on Flickr

 

They are not throwies and you are trying too hard to add style you need to get you're width consistency first

 

Any crits? -_-

 

not liking that e dont know if its a K or an R

 

^^^ agreed.

 

the width of the letter or the width of the entire throwie and what do you mean they arent throwies? and i get how i was trying too hard. i just switched my name to terf1 and am still adjusting. my old name was King KO but that sounded WAY too much like a toy and since king was a rank i decided not go with that and came up with terf, but yeah i dont understand why they arent throwies.

 

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Graffiti_terminology

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?2185-New-To-Graffiti-Start-Here!

 

something gives
did you cut around the border of that slap?
i can see that text and the red logo under your fill. it doesn't go on beyond the outline

/suspicious

 

It's a postal slap that's cut out. The background is copy paper. Now crit the throw? haha

 

terf - a throwup is something relatively simple that you can just throw up on a wall with consistency and speed over and over again, its like a big bubbly tag. Pieces are works of art that can take an hour to half a night to finish and can be many different styles. Pieces are what some civilians call "real graffiti", mainly because the majority of the public can appreciate them as well as writers. It is not a matter of good or bad.

Throwup


Piece

this shits making me look even worse lol, feedback is appreciated
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do we have a piece thread? no. we have a throwie thread, a tags thread, and a blackbook thread. if its not a throwie or a tag (or a char there is a thread for that too) it goes in the black book thread



EDIT:
GIMME CRITZZZ YOOOO


JESTR, the J is messed up as well as the T and the bottom part of the R. The E and S arent bad tho, youve got a consitant style of letters which is good just keep at it

 

crits anyone?

 

i eye orgasmed looking at that. that shit is awesome. and thank you everybody for the crits. its helping me out alot. i live in MO by st. louis and st. louis doesnt have much good graffiti and theres no writers nearby i can consult with so this forum is really helping.

 

The E should be consistent with the other letters. specifically the N.

 

nemo .. i think u should rethink the N and make the middle of the M thicker


could i get some crits plz

Snapshot_20110414 by grinder13, on Flickr

 

Your handstyle blows. That R needs work.

 

pretty shitty but it all practice