crit hard



crit hard ...it says COOQY if im bad

 

COOQY

Hey bruv, to me the 'C' looks too much like a 'V'.

 

crits?
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JESTR your pink one is better, every letter was better in the pink one.

It looks like a sick bomb, you could definitely get some serious ups with that. Go big or go home.

Work on keeping your curvy bits in the S and E, and defining the T and R better (like in the pink one)

I would also say work on the J, make it more like the bottom of your S.

 

any better?
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cooq get out of here...you told me your throwies were good at school... centry sams got that hot shit...jestr its all good but the j an r are the weakest

 

jestr, I like
keep at it bro... ure headin in the right direction
now I'd like to see you give your letter some more buff, some more fat if u know wht i mean... and more flow
props mayn

 

trying to stay away from the normal bubble letters, thoughts?

 

^Not really feeling it. Maybe try a different approach to non-bubble letter throwies.

 

mindtrix-does that read ELBUR if so i think the l and the r need work in the bomb

 

Yes sir, trying out a different name, though I haven't dropped the other one just yet.
Yeah, I figured I'd have to alter the rest of the throw because the only thing I've changed is adding an "E" and dropping "Wi".

 

word well i like the tag but the L needs a lil work

 

been workin with this style for awhile now any crits on wut could change it up

 

the s is a keeper, just flow it betta

 

guud looks man and by the way that book cover is dope

 

I agree with phat, that S is definetly a keeper. I liked your book cover phat, also congrats on becoming a moderator.

focused mainly on the j and r this time
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the j definatly needs work but its coming together

 

I just cant get it Dx
Anyone wanna sketch some J's that i can fuck with to get an idea for my throwie?

 

@task again i think thats more of a straight letter/simple than it is a throw-up... oh and start doin the bottoms of your letters, if your like me I like to bring everything i paint to the ground, so i do the same shit when i sketch but in order to develop letters on paper you gotta do the bottoms.... it helps

I know all the last throws of mine i posted all look practically the same, but i aint got any new throw styles at the moment
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