I think it's pretty cool at a first glance, but lots of room for improvement for sure.

The T Kind of overpowers the rest of the piece per se. Don't really see a problem with the O. The X definitely needs some work, and you know that. So do some work or something... The I is very hidden behind the X, yous should bring that out more. I thought the C was an attempt at a T? Or like an unfinished charecter? Try to make it look more like C.

 

@ATAK - X's are a bitch for throws, especially when they're in bubble. and toxic is a pretty toy name, just sayin

 

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Picture 128 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr

Picture 129 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr

Picture 127 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr

Picture 130 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr
tried to come up with a one liner

Picture 131 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr

 

That second picture is the best thing I think I've ever seen from you. Try and work on that. The first pictures is ok.

The others are pretty shitty dude, I would work with the first two. And practice them a lot before you post them again.

 

hmm ight.
i thought the second was the worst

 

norf- that throw is sick!!

 

how is this give me some feed back!

 

tried to fix the k just now, yes no?
and norf i agree that throw is sick
shake, i like how the bottoms look in the first one(just not crossing over the lines) but the letters themselves look better in the second.... and k's are a bitch.
coleo work with simpler letters, and make them all the same size (i have troubles making them all relatively the same too)

 

That's K is a lot better than what it was before. I like it a lot better now. Still needs some work on the K though.

 

ideas might come but as for me i hardly feel like sketching when im high as fuck it takes alot more concentration that i lack while stoned.

 

spam? what is that on looks like a window or something.

 

Yeah for me too, but i always try to keep it in mind and dont forget it.

 

can u read it?

 

lol no its on a cheezit box covered with sharpie

 

Everyone needs to stop trying so hard to make things look goo there is 0 flow on this page...

And there's a 'toxic' here in London that fuckin kils!

 

fixed

 

Rough sketch and a slap. Props to H1P3 for the idea.

 

I like that. I think the ES need some work, they're not quite the same looking style as the MU.