any improvement?
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Your K is sick, but the R looks to much like some sort of …. something. anyways. try and exsentuate the hole of the R, make a bit of a space. But other than that, its all dope man. I just won't comment on the green outline now…

 

stop giving crits nigeria boi. that throw is whack all the way to singapore

 

hahahhahahaha.... agreed......

 

had to put one up......

 

went down to a chill spot to practice today, got alot in. im getting a much better feel with can control now

Picture 137 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr

Picture 138 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr

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nicceee

 

Stick to your straights Kryl, and your tag is looking much better with some fatter lines and flares, just work on your can control.

 

something simple i'd appreciate crits, evil, bad or good i don't give a fuck just say what you think...........

 

^ uummmmmm ok...

 

Physh I don't really see where you were going with that one.. You can do better.

 

are they supposed to be wings? okay, also i think you should simplify your handy so people can actually read it.

 

its not all dope as criscros18 said, he doesnt know what dope is. your lines need work they're too shakey.

 

yeah, ive learned not to really take crits from inexperienced writers. thanks to the two that gave me actual help. I think my throws muct be getting wacker and wacker so IM just gonna start freash and come up with some new throwie letters. and about the shaky lines, i know, but its pretty hard with sharpies, and the cam just makes it look a whole lot worse because of the quality, but il work on that too

 

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fresh as always^. tryin to work out a new throw, heres a rough one, any crits on the general throw? i know the lines are rough, sharpies are a bitch, I was drawing in my bed, and i still need work.

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I say add more motion to the top, I at one point also used to think a near solid line across the top was a good idea but it look a little boring to me now, and the side of the y could use some shapin. and maybe do a little more with the L

 

bring your letters together and try a capital d instead cool character tho