they both suck. that s is wack try making it look more like and s and less blockish.

 

it was supposed to say "asp" but i see where it could be misleading. changed the A up a bit and connected the P

 

you need to make the top of the P a little bigger, i would bring the loop part down to match the line in the S

 

Throws from my old black book

noooo phat dont change i like your old name dude

 

oh yes.

 

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sorry but I'm really liking the pointy bottoms because my hand flows real nice with their movement.
but how about now, I fixed some proportions and shit. any better?
serious crits please. I'm really serious about it ok??? seriously!

 

colors im really feelin the greyish brown throw on the second pic thats so dope

 

yeee gees doin it dirty

 

diggen that vemon throw phat

 

i know y's are hard to do but change it up somehow so it looks a bit better.

 

Phat, it seems like your M is HUGE compared to the rest of it, maybe you could find a way to narrow it down a little. On the E you should do it like the top of your O make the left actually have the point that comes up, the way the E is right now looks awkward and forced, the point on the left side should help it flow more naturally.

 

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dope^ and that gees toss is grimey!

 

@york keep practicin work on the y'
@ phat decent man not sure about the color tho

 

@Phat I think that shit looks pretty good and the fill in looks almost like some kind of hemp spider web lol

 

Crits please...

 

Im back after a lonnng time with out painting
some really oldscraps i had

 

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