that r needs to be fixed. basically everything except the r and d seem good to me. the d would look good without that wavy thing in the middle
bumping on to the new page for more crits, hopefully this time from someone who's not a complete retard.
phat looks pretty good im liken this name but the n' i think the seconed bubble part on it is to phat compared to the rest lol u know wut i mean? also how come you never finished the 3d
Phatty- I'm gonna have to say you should scrap this. The points on the bottom aren't really working. The VE aside from the bottoms is decent. The rest of the letters are lacking badddd. Page for fun And one for myself.
damn nouv those are lookin good phat your om needs the most work, ven looks ok minus the bottom. lil one liner for fun oie_3062720PFTU851X-1
crits on the throws in this pic? been trying new shit out Picture 229 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr
word. nevermind the long bottoms. they can come and go. well mostly go... hehe but I'm gonna try something out since you guys are saying the v and e are fine and that the n's second leg is too big. I'm gonna link the n and o, and turn the second leg of the n into the o itself (just put a hole in it) and then figure something out for the M fuck I gotta be honest, the m's the hardest
linked the O into the N's "belly" and made a little tweak to the M I'm kinda going at this letter by letter until it's good. norfsuthr? nouveaup? gemer? [Broken External Image]:https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.ne...41930_100000507545549_1369050_271717812_n.jpg
I forgot there was a thread just for throws. nice fills sedge phat for me its the n....it just idk how to explain well. and i feel like the e needs some more definition its like sucked into the v. the points ehhh i kinda like em
skadeem that E and K is small, that 2nd ones cool phat, too many points and probably should "unlink" that O. it looks likes you are trying a bit too hard for that style