ugh i thought the throw up while i was looking at the wall call it a freestyle? idk i dont like it very much but w.e crits
not an actually a crit tell me what i should do with them bigger spaces smaller spaces idunno i like th K and A but ill do the first paper sketch ever with it see what i can do oh i just made up an A ;3 yessss
well you got a dope style goin, but i remember way back you've posted some throws and they were nicer then this. like the middle of the K throws it off as a H or M, just makes it less as an obvious K, thats probably more me being ocd. but the N looks like an M, try not bringing the middle up so high into the letter and also cut the 2nd bump on top. cause both of those basically define it as an M not an N. and the A just needs some tweaking so the middle is more centered, making the right part not look so much like a leg of an R. also you probably know this, but try to get it all lined up on the bottom. Coleo- i hate you cause you suck at life. if you fail at something why would you ask someone else to do it for you? you sound like a goddamn woman.
nah dog just keep practicing, just needs to be tweaked. by the looks of the throw you posted for Neso, i think you should grab some 10cent composition books and fill them up. not bad, just sloppy. WHY?! WHYYY?! WHYYY?!?!?! THE FUCK WOULD YOU GUYS POST HIM SHIT. i mean if it was someone that contributed, but this mother fucker... goddamn, he's just gonna bite you. thats what he said. straight up. "I hate throws because i suck at them, can you post me some so i can bite the fuck outta them?"
lol i could send you over some if you'd pay for postage... did a quickie SKINA, K and A's are fuckers. and Ns and Is.. lol just playin i just suck edit: COLEO- keep doin that over and over, do it bigger too, like 3 a page. and keep it simple like that but lose those tiny lil lines on the S if you can somehow understand which ones I'm describing ill be proud... and try not to overlap the N.