thanks for the props everybody bdsm, good job getting up, and overall good throw. but the right side of your H's bug me, in my opinion you should make them more symmetrical with the left side, rather than completely rounding it off. sroke(?), listen to kaze. for now, just keep it simple (i.e no unnecessary bumps, add-ons, etc.). Also, practice keeping your letters a more constant size, and making them flow better. other than that, keep practicing. also, consider changing your name, even just rearrange the letters would work, thats just my opinion though.
hogar i agree with tasty bout the H, other then that i like the throw just did some random words, crits would be nice
Kaze youre pieces are wayy to simple for your level, but your throwies are fucking on point, keep at it.
Naw that's a good thing imo. Go paint throws that are nice until you get better with your pieces. Pretty good page yall
@tasty: those are some great flowy throws, i disagree with salix about the holes though. them dots suit the letter structure nicely. i've always dug your sketches. @hogar: i love those throws, but the 'G' just kills it for me in all of them. and with it being in the middle of the throw, it kind of kills the flow, imo. have you ever tried fucking with a lower case 'g', i mean, you could make the same basic shape as the 'a' and put the hole on top instead. i don't know, just a suggestion. some other shit i came up with over break today. for mone, trying to even it up a little bit.
yea the g has always been a bitch to me, and i agree that it often kills the flow, thanks for suggesting lowercase, i never really though of throwin that in there and that mone is moneyyy
i think your first fake in the second picture looks the most clean, id stick with that cause it looks the most apealing
thanks gatsoi and MN, im trying to add little things to my simps like small bends and shit, i do gotta get better can control though. appreciate the posative feedback guys Arose thats sick, so many trippy faces in there quikhand, its better but the S is still kinda off i think, and done have the bottom part of ur E go pointy like that that blue and white throw in the second picture is sick, cant even make out wat it says after the J,E,A though lol
thanks mang, means a lot coming from someone at your level and i'll bump this for both the sick throw, and whatever the hell that character in the background is. too sick. repost, because i can't properly bum the originals. and the product of bored-ness at work