Alright, no more fuckin around on here. Fuck ribcage and all the other trolling bitches on this forum. I'm here to see some dope shit and progression from you other writers and I want to get better. Now how about some crits?
wow im an idiot..thanks for pointing that out krumpet, i didnt notice it before. and thanks sneez, i get wat ur saying now gatsoi i agree with krumpet bout the right leg of ur R, and also the left leg of ur R looks like its going directly straight up, i think it would look better if it was on a slight angle to the left going up any crits on these would be cool, think i fuked up the drop shadow on the 2nd pic, dont think i should done the little bit at the top left of the D plus its just sloppy
ska go more simple. desr: first one's got better e. you are on right tracks to develope a style, just go and play with letters, all i can say.
[Broken External Image]:https://fbcdn-sphotos-b-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/206147_481317081888279_561477685_n.jpg this is a montage, the shutters are further apart in reality I now realise that I should've gone with a lower case A... but meh, a bomb's a bomb
thanks sneez, appreciate it, il keep working on em. i dig ur throw there but the only letter im not really liking is the E, maybe its just me but the middle part seems to small, i like the wrest though venom i dig that i think it looks dope demond toss the first 2..use basic, striaght forward bubble letters for throws for now, that bottom one is osmthin more that should be int he black book and atleast it has bars in it, even though they r all over the place, seriously if u wana get better start out using keyboard letters
@phat: nice one(s). diggin' the 't' alot. @sink: forget everything you think you know about throws. @kaze: dope. i'd try a different lower case 'e' on the second one, and the last letter is confusing me.
thank arose, iv been trying to mess around with lower case E's in throws but been having som trouble lol, and the last letter is suppose to be a lower case R
thanks mild, appreciate it stene just keep practicing simple throws Felony id lose the pointed bottom thing, try som simpler stuff
that wayyy better then before, im surprised. i think that E would look better with out that little attachment on the top right bar though. that seems like more of somthing that u should post in the blackbook section though, but again who am i to say wat is wat lol...this is alot better then that other shit though, keep it up and try doing even some simpler stuff like straight keyboard letters..they r harder then they look to make look as perfect as u can make them
does that say sekor?? i know of a sekor around here..anyways i think the K and R would look better if you did the bottom part normally for now, for somreason it looks better on the K but just try doing it normally for now for the toy throw battle, i dont like the N or the drop shadow very much