i cant really tell what it says can you spell it out? i think you did the same thing i did where you made it too complicated before starting with easier stuff. I'm not gonna tell you to start over cause i get so annoyed when people tell that to me but just simplify first so you don't lose the structure of the letters. It does look pretty sick though
ok yeah i see it the M and the O are good but the ADA looks more like AX. you want to be careful with how you extend some of your lines so that it doesn't end up looking like another letter.