Zane- not too bad, make that Z a little thinner so it fits in with the other letters. Saje- I don't like the S, but I think the rest is dope. Make the S more curved in the middle. Twix- bring the letters closer together. Maybe look at other people's shit and bite their T's W's I's and X's and put them all together. Then start changing it into your own shit. I think my G came out shitty. Crits on the letter structure?
I like the R....kina of how mine look. Mind you my new steeze as been failing...so it is probably the opposite of what i think.
shitty letters, shitty markers, shitty flick, you get the idea [Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG000219.jpg aegr - nice letters, id make the middle bar of your g a little bit smaller, im not really feeling your r either edit: 400 posts!
Thanks for all the crits. I'll fix that shit up. Shpel- I guess you summed it up pretty much. Aside from the sketchiness, it looks fine to me. I think you should add some shit to it.
zane- change your z and e aegr- fix your r and making your bars more equal in width wouldnt hurt either. klic- just keep practicing and try to make the lines cleaner.
klic- try and draw straighter lines. zane- try and make all the letters proportional. the "z" is huge. Crits??
THanks for tha crits GYSE- looks dope...jus work on the R AES-I dig the philly hands at the bottom, but is it HAD or AAD?either way that cross bar on the first letter is a lil off
reko- that shit is on piont like an arrow. keep it up josh- thats amazing.... lol View attachment 432223 crits please!!!!
i like it homie, just erase the bar marks. View attachment 432226 just a lil handy, and a left hand straight letter EDIT&&& LOL, i use to work at a factory that printed coupons, etc. and we were making these 75c off cig coupons, and i was like fuck it; i was on my break so i went into breakrom and hit one up and i put it back on the motionbelt and small world it is, it was at 711, the one on the top of every other. i was like WOW, only fucked up thing was it has finger print shit all over it because i put it on the belt while it was wet. View attachment 432227 LOL
Gysie- fix tht r man n itll look nasty Had- u posted tht pik up like 10 times but it decent Josh- i think tht shitz pretty ill Grafdabus up - nice flow working on this new style critz? [Broken External Image]:http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/009.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/010.jpg the k is a lil whack
nlis:i should search another name i think it isn't a good combo of letters it doesn't flow,the s isn;t a simple letter(keyboard)
sike - fix your I and K nice coloring tho. ketchup - new to graff thread.. i see your shit everywhere u just dont listen to crits dog.