Chok - I also thought the fill looks tight on your second one there cept when I first looked at it it looked like it said MIOK cuz the C and H mix to look like an M kinda, but it is still a nice simple. Im not feeling the S on this one at all but crits would be nice. [Broken External Image]:http://img693.imageshack.us/img693/3628/img000091.jpg
looks...umm...ok Check out mine. [Broken External Image]:http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/CRAZONER.jpg
@Zane, keep the bars consistent. Like with your Z the bar on the bottom is a skinnier than the top one and it looks a little off. Otherwise you're making progress keep it up @Craz, if that's a simp you need to get rid of everything and start it over. There's no bars at all. For a throw its not too bad just let the A breathe more and tweak the Z
dont post stupid things like yup or word or okay or anything like that it just stupid, in fact i should even have to post this post since im sure it is in the rules somewhere
the overall letters don't look that bad per say, but try to fix your proportions, your letters get smaller and skinnier as you read it.
hahaha no doubt man axctually bein a senior member means your cope 2 for a day, being a junior member means your cap