hey, just looking for some constructive crits. i only had a couple caps with me and they both clogged, which was tricky to work with, but yah, and im still keeping with simples till i have them locked. thanks in advance!
Jist- i actually dig it, nice strait letter, looks clean and a nice fill. Esco- work on your E and make it cleaner, looks like a chill spot, just take your time. Came- Real clean really solid, keep it up. Worms- it looks good just keep the bars the same size Kers- fresh fresh, i really dig your E for some reason. I hand painted in a while so i did all of these pieces one day, the last one is screwy cause its pretty much the first time ive tried to paint at night so go easy on that one.. The only thing i like about that one is the fill.. but crit the piss out of me..
To the guy that said this was clean...Yo, sorry to the comment about this bein clean, and to the guy that's doin this in the action shot... Shit is Garbage bro...The fill you did is str8, you actually got solid color, but yo, your letter structure is...yo, it's some toy shiit...BUT honestly, stay up you know? No hard feelins, Jus hit the skecth book, hit it hard then come back out cause ya, the waves, the teeth, the point on the top left of the "E" It's all pointless cause it throw's the whole thing off. You gotta balance it out, Send throught a skecth after you work on it, cause no lie...I'd wreck that with out a doubt if that was in my city. Stay up.
snew - I would say take all the extensions off the end of the letters fatten them up like the middle of the w lines and just go simple. For the thing above i agree with him the s is decent take all that shit off the e and make it simple like the s just go simple and it would be way better.
esco-the E needs some cleaning up, and i think the center of the O is too far down. snew-i think the 2nd throwup is your best. keep working on them like that. kers-i think the entire piece is pretty clean and it came out good. the only thing that bothers me is i think the center piece of the E shouldnt be attached to the top extension. [Broken External Image]:http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/8264/dronebombff6.jpg I was painting in a pitch black water tunnel.
3d sucks, fill sucks, outline sucks, and bad can control over all. Paint during the day in a chill spot and practice.
ok so i supposed i havent got feedback cause i havent gave any, fair enough, so here goes, drone - try shakin you rpaint more man, and take some time with it, it looks wayyy to rushed, even if its a heat spot do something that you can make look a bit tighter snew-work on your shadow, i think it could be a bit bigger and needs to all go in the same direction, itll make your piece look bigger/take up more space. kers-looks nice, but isnt there a big kers already in the friehgt scene? might be worth checkin into...
snew try and thicken up your letters drone why so many drips? you shoulda cut back over them it woulda looked a lot nicer. your 3d is kinda fucked too and your outline needs work second time out in over six months gotta love colorplace [Broken External Image]:http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/6907/1021081806mp8.jpg the fill and forcefield on this one were done with those new krylon tips and boy do they suck [Broken External Image]:http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/6105/1021081807apc0.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://fc16.deviantart.com/fs33/f/2008/296/f/f/Toy_bomb_1_by_jayz146.jpg Wow Dat came Owt huge.Ummm I am still Practicin' on my book but im also workin on my paint. I used Khylon lack fusion and Kylon white flat.didnt like how da white turned up is der a better white