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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.

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  1. esco93

    esco93 Senior Member

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  2. drumnbass

    drumnbass Member

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    hey, just looking for some constructive crits.

    i only had a couple caps with me and they both clogged, which was tricky to work with, but yah, and im still keeping with simples till i have them locked.

    thanks in advance!
     

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  3. Snew

    Snew Senior Member

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    Jist- i actually dig it, nice strait letter, looks clean and a nice fill.
    Esco- work on your E and make it cleaner, looks like a chill spot, just take your time.
    Came- Real clean really solid, keep it up.
    Worms- it looks good just keep the bars the same size
    Kers- fresh fresh, i really dig your E for some reason.

    I hand painted in a while so i did all of these pieces one day, the last one is screwy cause its pretty much the first time ive tried to paint at night so go easy on that one..

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    The only thing i like about that one is the fill..

    but crit the piss out of me..
     
  4. Hi Haters

    Hi Haters Member

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    your middle one is the best, work with it.
    keep it up
     
  5. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    ^ was thinking the same.
    fix up the S.

    make it taller and skinnier like the rest of the letters.
     
  6. CamEcbc

    CamEcbc New Member

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    please more coments....
     
  7. HaLo_07

    HaLo_07 Senior Member

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    To the guy that said this was clean...Yo, sorry to the comment about this bein clean, and to the guy that's doin this in the action shot...

    Shit is Garbage bro...The fill you did is str8, you actually got solid color, but yo, your letter structure is...yo, it's some toy shiit...BUT honestly, stay up you know? No hard feelins, Jus hit the skecth book, hit it hard then come back out cause ya, the waves, the teeth, the point on the top left of the "E" It's all pointless cause it throw's the whole thing off.

    You gotta balance it out, Send throught a skecth after you work on it, cause no lie...I'd wreck that with out a doubt if that was in my city.

    Stay up.
     
  8. Nagger

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    snew - I would say take all the extensions off the end of the letters fatten them up like the middle of the w lines and just go simple.

    For the thing above i agree with him the s is decent take all that shit off the e and make it simple like the s just go simple and it would be way better.
     
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  9. ColdBlooded

    ColdBlooded Senior Member

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    Bump for crits..

     
  10. SOAR into outer SPACE

    SOAR into outer SPACE Member

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    esco-the E needs some cleaning up, and i think the center of the O is too far down.
    snew-i think the 2nd throwup is your best. keep working on them like that.
    kers-i think the entire piece is pretty clean and it came out good. the only thing that bothers me is i think the center piece of the E shouldnt be attached to the top extension.

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    I was painting in a pitch black water tunnel.
     
  11. noxi

    noxi Elite Member

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    3d sucks, fill sucks, outline sucks, and bad can control over all. Paint during the day in a chill spot and practice.
     
  12. drumnbass

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    ok so i supposed i havent got feedback cause i havent gave any, fair enough, so here goes,


    drone - try shakin you rpaint more man, and take some time with it, it looks wayyy to rushed, even if its a heat spot do something that you can make look a bit tighter
    snew-work on your shadow, i think it could be a bit bigger and needs to all go in the same direction, itll make your piece look bigger/take up more space.
    kers-looks nice, but isnt there a big kers already in the friehgt scene? might be worth checkin into...
     
  13. ColdBlooded

    ColdBlooded Senior Member

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    Thats Kerse..
    I write kerso, there was no room
    My buddy did a charactor right there.
     
  14. calculating infinity

    calculating infinity Elite Member

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  15. d-stroy

    d-stroy Senior Member

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  16. d-stroy

    d-stroy Senior Member

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    Çalculating infinity - Throw ups look pretty straight. Not bad at all.
     
  17. revid!

    revid! Elite Member

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    jares and jumo lookin good
     
  18. Shamy

    Shamy Member

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    d stroy nice throwys but what did u go over =P
     
  19. XskeletorX

    XskeletorX Senior Member

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    calculating infinity - shits dope as fuck!
     
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