ive been caught a few times, shit happens. im done with the whole postin flicks thing. you guys cant help me with critism anymore... so there's no point in posting. know what im sayin? maybe a bunch of flicks a couple times a year.. but forums are only for shit talkin and periodically helping others through critism. sore, your improving a great amount. try making some bars thinners and some thicker. it'll add some flava to it. hoer, dope can control. that bubble shit is very well done. i wouldnt have made it so circular. have some bubbles shootin out in some spots. know what im sayin?
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fase- prolly some of the toyest shit ive ever seen... do ur homework and hit the books before u start painting anything timeless- nice spot and that thor char is pretty ill hoer- not a fan of the color schemes but the letter structure is good... maybe juss spend more time on the grapes if thats what its supposed to be sore- decent structure id juss say to keep the bars on the o straight especially the bottom one.. dont make it bend at all
hett- fill up the dead space... or do a new outline. nice to see your can control improving though vader, hit the books.. and clean it up
lasek - you always cover up your A's way too much, you can only see a bit of the left bar... move it out a bit or try lower case
damn, i think its good. maybe the L over A thing is over exaggerated. but other than that. i liked it.
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shits dope, really like the r. i dont like all the stuff inside the o. but fresh forsure keep that up. nice throw aswell. and im always a fan of hoers stuff from the last page. flick for talking . View attachment 445120
I've been writing Capo/Dope for a while....and I just did my first piece today at this warehouse thing me and my friend hit... And then some throws as well... Crits? Sarto-pretty sick simple there, good flow unsucessful-Can't really tell what the colored one says, but damn looks phunky phreshhhhh...
those capo throwies are weak. but that dope throwie is fresh as fuck! i'd fix up the bottom of the E. try an make it a bar like your P but keep it tight to the top rather than the tumor you got. know what im sayin? the extension on your C looks like an S. and actually so does the bit on the right end..
Dude dont write caps, stick to one name and practice that And Lasek wheres the double outline out? Happy first post to me for my new name, thanks to yahoo for fucking me up and loosing my old name, well whatever being a JR memb is better than wasting my life on some other website right?