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Nice work dude. The last 'Meat' piece is hot shit.

 

thanks dude.

 

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Did that today.

First time trying this style.

 

not to be harsh but that fill is whack. looks like you're tryna run before you can crawl

 

dont put faces in your o. thats startin to get played. a simple circle or line will do just fine. and that fill is pretty whack.

 

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You can see it's a light blue fill right? The purple as just an add on. I gotta try something new right?

 

dont try peices. focus on handstyles for a few months..nothing more.

 

the purple is what makes it whack. does it say stot?

 

^^
I wanted to try something different. Yea I write Stot..

 

nah, sorry it just looks like a b+w throw with purple added last minute. and if those are T's, dont seperate the top from the bottom, i thought they were I's

 

^ Yea it's a reallly light blue. I like the T like that

 

lookin goood facethatrooof...me likey yo steez

 

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I dont have any white or else i would have added some lighting and shines. i need some more can control but that comes through practice.

 

Um Clokkz....is that a joke? If it's not then I'd say don't paint for awhile and stick to sketching in a blackbook, simples and such

 

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i guess i just suck

 

Ok man, slow it wayyy down, do basic, simple letters for awhile, keep working on sketching and posting your sketches in here for crits, Let's see a simple.

 

clockz, no arrows, go simple, bubble letters.