sick ass handstyle on that pink S dude. You guys are ready for the big boy threads

 

end of the year shit

 

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Advise?

 

just got up in my back yard, crits?

 

snoketg you need to clean that up, its toooooo sloppy. Like with the bottom part of the S, make it just overlap out lining the whole letter doesnt give it that clean look. Also i cant really make out the last letter, is it an E or a G?

 

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sorry for shitty flick of the second one it was on a roof couldnt walk back any further. first time painting in a longgggggg time.

 

Malto, ur letters are wayy to far apart, and the second pic is shitty.

 

doppeeee shitt man

 

its an e but thanks for the feedback ill clean it up

 

Sense that's great shit! Veko I think your throws would improve if you found a better e and went skinny and tall more like the second, that's a preference of mine though

I can't decide if I should be that guy and say sake is on top in Montreal.....but who really gives a fuck as long as you don't paint in the same places.

 

thanks for the crits skad...i would made it taller but there was nowhere to step and i decided to make it like that.So today i came with the idea to paint in my training construction...bad idea -10 degrees in the mist felt like even more cold..This is the result of my first piece ever

i don't like it at all it has many mistakes but practice makes perfection.

 

its a throwie man some ppl like that look on throws

 

No, it's actually sloppy. Your outlines shouldn't be sloppy because you should be used to doing this motion over and over again.

 

Im from australia so no problem there.

VEKO - I like it for a nice simple. work on your 3D/shadow though, i like that K but it doesnt fit in with the other letters cause the bars are skinnier. good work though

 

thanks man,preciate the crits...couse its my first piece i hate but i will try to improve if i got the money(the only missing part).I work out how to combine the k and the o couse they do not fit everytime i put em togheter.Any suggestions on that?

 

any crits on my new tag?

Picture 182 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

 

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another aussie boy on the forums nice