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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.

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  1. _ESKER_

    _ESKER_ Member

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    yeah i couldnt work out the c so i just left it like that.. i need to try to make it look nice...any suggestions
     
  2. Skeam

    Skeam Senior Member

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    this doesnt have anything to do with the C but i think the whole throwie would look heaps better it the top right of the A was kinda pointy like the rest of the top right parts on your letters and also have the top left part of the M/H (i couldnt tell what it was) rounded instead of pointy so all of your pointy bits go the same way
     
  3. doomsayer

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    im feelin the top one...
     
  4. RKT47

    RKT47 Senior Member

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    its like that that in the top one but yea the c needs work but i think the "m" is nice
     
  5. Krash

    Krash Senior Member

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    lookin pretty fresh actually.the proportions look off a smidge in the middle of the z.
     
  6. acek

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  7. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

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    Why do people post "old shit" all the time? I mean, if it's old then you've probably progressed more than that right? Then why would you need critz for it? Anway, the 2nd and 3rd ones are nice. Except in the 3rd one, what'd the last letters upposed to be? It looks like DSZ but I don't know why you'd bomb DSZ if your name is Dask... Still nice though

    And krash, I think that's just the angle/glare of the shot

    I'll get some flicks up here of practice throwies at this bank I know but in like a week or 2
     
  8. Krash

    Krash Senior Member

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    word to that
     
  9. unkownWPB

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  10. Krash

    Krash Senior Member

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    work on spacing an proportion ^^^^
    the v and the o are spaced,while the i and the d are tight together.and if you're going to use all capitals,you can take that dot off the i.hope it helps :)
     
  11. unkownWPB

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    the i was fucked, but im gona post some more thanks.
     
  12. Krash

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  13. unkownWPB

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    whats a good website to have a photo album in besides photobucket?
     
  14. Krash

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  15. elcs

    elcs Elite Member

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    bump for crits [/b][/quote]
    I like these alot. The first pic is real good. Real good structure and everything, but its a shitty outline. its all wavy and shit and not very clean. Id say just practice that throw a little more and clean it up and it will look pretty damn good. that said, i like it...just work on that outline. the throws in the second and third picture are awsome. they look great, keep it up.
     
  16. acek

    acek Senior Member

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    i write dask2.... so its a 2 not a z
     
  17. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

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    O shit, my bad... I haven't seen many throwie's with numbers in them
     
  18. T R E O

    T R E O Elite Member

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    dask go back over your lines.they look sketchy and look like you were a lil bit shakey.same thing applies to your highlight.and to me,your s looks a bit off.so does your a.but clean fill in.keep at it
     
  19. leaks

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  20. T R E O

    T R E O Elite Member

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    its clean.but the first two letters look familiar to me.not feeling the third letter.all the lil lines in the letters distract me a lot