yeah i couldnt work out the c so i just left it like that.. i need to try to make it look nice...any suggestions
this doesnt have anything to do with the C but i think the whole throwie would look heaps better it the top right of the A was kinda pointy like the rest of the top right parts on your letters and also have the top left part of the M/H (i couldnt tell what it was) rounded instead of pointy so all of your pointy bits go the same way
Why do people post "old shit" all the time? I mean, if it's old then you've probably progressed more than that right? Then why would you need critz for it? Anway, the 2nd and 3rd ones are nice. Except in the 3rd one, what'd the last letters upposed to be? It looks like DSZ but I don't know why you'd bomb DSZ if your name is Dask... Still nice though And krash, I think that's just the angle/glare of the shot I'll get some flicks up here of practice throwies at this bank I know but in like a week or 2
work on spacing an proportion ^^^^ the v and the o are spaced,while the i and the d are tight together.and if you're going to use all capitals,you can take that dot off the i.hope it helps
bump for crits [/b][/quote] I like these alot. The first pic is real good. Real good structure and everything, but its a shitty outline. its all wavy and shit and not very clean. Id say just practice that throw a little more and clean it up and it will look pretty damn good. that said, i like it...just work on that outline. the throws in the second and third picture are awsome. they look great, keep it up.
dask go back over your lines.they look sketchy and look like you were a lil bit shakey.same thing applies to your highlight.and to me,your s looks a bit off.so does your a.but clean fill in.keep at it
its clean.but the first two letters look familiar to me.not feeling the third letter.all the lil lines in the letters distract me a lot