kerf thats pretty good i like the e heres my first actual bomb [Broken External Image]:http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/9148/cesa9jr.jpg theres a lot of stuff in the background from other people crits?
do a fill in and say goodbye to whatevers behind it.. it looks like its all shit behing er any how.. good S, can't fully ,make out the A but i would overlap the top piece with the middle instead of tucking behind... the E needs a bit of work and Is that a C??
(maybe go back when you have your letters a bit better and do and black fill with gold outline...that'd be sexy eh?
this is like the 5th time im painting and like the 2nd doing a character, and tomorow il post my first throw up, so here is the character i did, in like 5 mins View attachment 245652
The character is pretty nice man, wish it it was on a cleaner wall though lo so i could see it beter. Wiska - im also really digin your throwy.. you do that on yoru school? heres what i just came in from you doin.. crits?
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh first time going out bombing. I tried to do them all as fast as I could but yeah here ya go! What'd ya think? I thought they're pretty awesome for my first time on public property. [Broken External Image]:http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/2747/1212007079wt.th.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/7483/1212007026mc.th.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/2460/1212007080cz.th.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/313/1212007096gg.th.jpg
i'd leave the spraypaint in the garage for a while. just start blackbooking, go back to the basics, basic letters. and where are you that it's so nice and sunny out?
i think you should work on your letters if you want to be better on walls JUST PRACTICE about sketchnig you have excellent tutorials topic
CRIT BEFORE YOU POST YOUR OWN! wiska looks nice but the a is real low hask the very bottom if the only decent one lose all the sharp corners and make the letters proportional... aser you arent ready for one liners MASTER reg throws first and nice tag sone the e is leaning too much and that left side of the n is huge cesa the bottom of the c is weird like..idk how to explain ill show you later kerf the e is huge and the f is small stick to paper kon? you letters are disproportioned the is too big and dont make the n go down so much color....BLACK BOOKS ONLY STICK TO PAPER! yea...
first post let me know what u think also how do u post pictures? http://s121.photobucket.com/albums/o207/as...ent=graf096.jpg
Nice! I like it. The White outline is a little sloppy CopyPaste the URL between [img ] and [/img ] tags You can find the URL underneath the picture
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