Allright, I was trying to do this off a sketch and I noticed after the first letter I wasnt going to have enough room, so I just did the first two letters. And I skrewed up on the L a little bit. and half way through I went from like a drop shadow to 3d. so don't point that out again. Any other crits? View attachment 268817 View attachment 268818
put the paint down for a while buddy and work on your letters you wont regret it simple block letters for you im affraid
develop your letters more lad ^ View attachment 268961 View attachment 268962 Also, this is my first peice (the pink one), the 'green' is a mates first as well.. I know how horrible it is, but still feedback and tips would be appreciated. Peace.
apologize? offer cans? thats fucking gay, graffiti aint about being nice to one another, shit under looks gross anyway..........
Brisvegas stick to paper for a while get better at basics [Broken External Image]:http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/2992/morneone3ml2.jpg i posted this a while ago but got like 1 crit, its like my 3rd throwie so crits?
500 posts and you've only ever done 3 throwys? By the way its an obviously bitten style. Try to make your own shit or at least make it look good since you didnt come up with it.
cheers JRoc, I've been writing since late 2004.. That was a sad attempt but i'm content with my style I think I just need to practice more with the can, and develop can control. Your throwie is pretty ugly man no offense, try to develop it more like a peice executed faster (basic definition of a throw-up). Peace
no beef but it looks like you've been writing for 2 months instead of 2-3 years...directed at Brisvegas.
Yeah you're FIRST piece and you're telling effin whats his name to develop his letters more.. You need to develop yours more and stick to paper for awhile lad. Don't need that in Brisbane.