Secks...i gave you sum pretty good feedback a few pages back man...go check it out

 

Mask- I like it... but what's up with the second letter?

 

mask- i like evrything except the a but i theink the k is dope

setz- i like the peice stright up. nice fill nice evrything!

soke- well i think k is what need most work but on it somemore.

 

Bump.

Soke dont do the orange around it, just a thick final wouldve looked better. nice colours tho.

mask keep workin on it, lookin nice. M and K are the best letters

 

trash- throw a forcefield around it and it will be nice.

i'm guilty to that throw. and yeah tag is toooooo big.

 

chalk-im a big fan of your work, very nice throw
make-i like the colors, shame the wall was crappy. clean lines
mask- i like it just maybe work on your 'a' a tad?
secks-pretty good for a freestyle haha cept i dont like the k
trash-looks real good just maybe make it bigger next time (yeah not much of a crit, sorry)

ok, im still definitely a toy but im slowly getting better, crits please? and not just "that sucks" please and thanks guys

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daisyface- Nice and clean, but work on you letter structure a little more. And maybe next time, dont put such a thick forcefield around it.

 

practice board late night solo drunkin mission! drinkin a paintin is fun. i recommend it. well, if can at least.

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did this last week
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lovein it. wish it was a bit cleaner. black is a bit choppy pink force field would have made it pop

 

yeh jers u got bare potential, i see your throw up too, s'gettin on well, butt i see in the other pic as well your handy is a little average. dunno why but good throw-ups/pieces with not so great handys kinda bug me. i think its mainly ur RS in the. but other than that, yeh, s'alllllll good.

 

Alot of pretty good shit on this page. Fube- I've always been a fan of your style.

I hate stock caps... I woulda cleaned it up more but we had a fuckin thunderstorm. I'm going back tommorow to redo the aqua outline with a black outline so it pops better and clean it up a bit...
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thanks that means a lot comin from u brotha.

your shit is poppin hard without another black outline. lovein it.

 

that stuff is fresh as hell cezr
havent been on for months...

karak at a chill wall he saying 20!
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crits?

 

any advice, crits, anything... try not to be to mean i know im still a big toy... ive only been writeing for about a year so i still have alot of learning to do! Thanx

 

jast i like all of those, cept the 's' but good work yo

 

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me just about the same. thats a sick chill spot. keep progressing in the book and try to paint as clean as u can.