theres sommit not rite about the 3Dness on the last one, all 3 are still sick though, especialy the second, the spaceing on the first one seems off especialy on the last 2 letters
it's not 3d, it's a drop shadow (but the drop shadow is off nonetheless). also, the M is too thin, makes it un-proportional to the other letters
Im not a painter yet but man.... you should work with paper frist sketch yo shit out frist then put it up. After practing it.
that didn't really redeem anything. take your time when you paint. fill solid, do cutbacks, do a force field..something. those letters are kinda tired too, maybe cook something new in the book before you paint again.
Lakai= IT SUCK START OVER OMG!!!!! JK It nice I like the Highlights Make it pop. The color is kind of dual tho.
Nice Lakai. I dont need to tell you good control, cause you know that allready. And that S is fresh. And CIN man, im not hating by any means. But if you have a practice spot...PRACTICE. Your control is way off. TezM and SKOR should be helping you out.
SUMN, that S is dope, U is alright, M looks kinda squished, maybe its cause you got the pole, and the N could stand to be fixed up a bit. i would say get rid of that little extension poking out of the right side of the N, maybe make the right side of the U and the N flow like the right side of the M. nice can control. and virus, whatchootalkinbout? those colors are fresh.
not trying to sound like a bitch, but both of these pieces were painted completely pitch black, but nevertheless rip them to pieces if you must. View attachment 377550 View attachment 377551 View attachment 377552
^ letters dont look to bad...just the paint looks like shit for some reason...and when you do a force field try not to stop... kinda one long motion...
haha on the top on i ran out of silver for the force and couldnt reach the top of the e and r cuz it was over water
new painted charac didnt have any pink left to cut back chump your sig is insane, where's it from? hoer- is it just me or is that really bad paint on the last one? like really bad? apart from that it seems good, i dont like the little circles in the last one but the letters seem solid, im guessing you couldnt reach the top of the first one as well and your tag would look pretty good closer together with a fat marker
keep sketching the character and post in tot characters thread for some help on it...i got it from a guy i know, on his blog.