idky but looks tight

 

rhyse im not feelin your I bro, its too big.

some after work shit to loosen me up for the weekend. not feelin this one much.

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sexy, but experement with your e,
its mad generic

 

Your spot huh ?...old TAMK tags
My next peice ill be rocking the cream background...

 

dope... i like it, outlines a little sloppy in places tho

 

thanks homey, dude you really should come up for real!! ! !!! thatd be so dope.

 

jetpack digging it improving alot just work on the s and the k then it will be tight

 

First time ever using paint, always blackbooked. Sorry for the shitty cellphone pics. Crits? mainly looking for tips.

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dosent deserve a bump, but one bump each..

rhyse, blackbook it first. ive made that mistake a bunch of times. ruins my pieces.

task, keep working at it. your shits pretty decent. and get larger pictures

fetus, stick to the blackbooks a lil while longer

 

love that R jetpack...

some shit on the freeway

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fucked the K on my throw

 

irekn- your throws look a lot better on paper, you should try doing each letter in one continuous motion (it looks like you dont), because i think thats what makes it look worse
rasek- its clean, just keep experimenting with fills. also, i think you should tilt your k like you did to your r, or maybe tilt all the letters
asek- hit the books

 

i like your style, once ure can control improves thatll look alot better, i realy like it though

 

Thanks for the comments guys, I'll take the advice

 

rhyse stay in the book for now
same with you IREKN

jetpack- doesnt look like you do all your lines in one stroke, you should do that, slowly, eventually you will get better at painting and dont worry about drips you an ALWAYS cut back unles your doing a burner which your not so no worries just keep it up and try to perfect your simple caz the right leg on the R looks kinda funky and hte S doesnt seem to fit but its almost thjere
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thanks for the advice guys!

 

yo rasek that shit looks dope, and rhyse work on yours a little, that shit would look dope if that style was perfected and irekn that looks alright and kasr that shit looks dope as well, but not the s, but mybe its just me, but otherwise it looks nice.
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kasp the second ones pretty ill son, cept for the gangbanger "O" but i can look past it. the first one, eh no offence but dont use that one ever again.

emel- fuckin dope.