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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.

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  1. esoteric

    esoteric Member

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    been messin around in the blackbook for a while heres my first try with a can in my hand



    and yeah i know its only 3 letters i ran out of room like an idiot, ill drop another one tomorrow and save space
  2. my.favorite.addiction

    my.favorite.addiction Banned

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    Task I think you should keep both the notch an the dots,keep it original.

    xKEEPITPOSIx New Member

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    I'm new to the forum but have been watching the action going on in here for a while. I've been working on my stuff for the past three months probably, here's some of the haggard shit I've done. Before people jump on me, I live in the middle of no-where and know that my stuff is whack. I'd love some crits and feedback to make sure I've progressed.






  4. adyo87

    adyo87 New Member

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  5. Speedy

    Speedy Senior Member

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    I like your last one the best Jerm. The can control is a lot better than the previous 2. You can tell there aren't any spots on it where you stalled or anything. Nice work. As for the first 2 it looks like you did the outline first.

    Muse, I like #5 the best. Your U looks like an N on the last one.
  6. emel

    emel Senior Member

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    cmon now...

    thats a common form of the letter R....
  7. Speedy

    Speedy Senior Member

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  8. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    Muze- your letter structure needs some work but there is progression between the photos. Honestly though i wouldnt worry about any crazy fills yet.

    Jerm- That last pic is by far the best, the main thing i would change though is extend the bar that seals the top part of the E down.

    Speedy- its not bad but im not likin the blue, it shoulda been brown like camo... atleast thats what i woulda done
  9. klic

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    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    Rots - That shit looks mad clean man. I just think the R could flow a little better with the rest.
    Task - Its decent. Just fix that S.
    Muze - Im just not diggin the letters at all man. Nor the "sick fills". Just keep working at it dude.
    Jerm - You're almost there. I don't like your throw at all though. Your last piece is decent. Just work on your E and M.
    Jask - Just work on your letters a bit more. I dont like the drips though. Just doesnt fit with that piece in particular. Your control is decent though.

    Edit* I dont think I said decent enough.
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  11. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    seriously? that's hoer's exact r.
    up to the 3 dots for the hole in it.

    i wasn't trying to be a dick calling out a bite.
    i was just saying.

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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  13. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    it aint worth shit! just playin i like that new peice. You'll have to tell me where its at later. I did a daytime quick throwie peice today. Flicks on the way

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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  15. Phantazm

    Phantazm Senior Member

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  16. raveone

    raveone Member

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    task ur peice u did is cool and all.
    but why so many points on the end of your letters?
    keep that simple
  17. COLOR192

    COLOR192 Senior Member

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    Ease: on the left bar of the A shoulda been a bit thiner at the top. and the 2nd E seems shorter than the first one

    here's the lil throw up:

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    Nah, all of my letters are exactly the same size. Its just the angle of the flick.
  19. MUSEone

    MUSEone Elite Member

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    maybe hes rather have more block type letters than rounded?

    thats a simple imo.
  20. H3TT1NG3R

    H3TT1NG3R Elite Member

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    zero-its alright, i kinda dont liek all teh different little bits comuing off the edges of teh letters, liek the end of the o,. and middle of the e. but other than that it seems u have pretty decent can control, unliek me lmao.
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    um ya i couldnt get a full pic yet, but crit it as is, i fucked up bigtime, teh sek is bigger than the l and a. owell. ALSO teh fuckign gold burned through the black outline and shadow